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No idea why I feel obligated to say this, except that it's 7:55 am and I am killing time before an 8:15 am meeting...

What do I look for when I pick up a science fiction book? (Any book, for that matter, but especially SF.) All I ask for are three things:

1. Make me turn the pages.
2. Show me something I haven't seen before.
3. Be honest.

Easy, right? 

1. I think number one is the hardest. There are many authors (including many who have had wonderfully successful careers without my stamp of approval, thankyouverymuch) who seem to fail at this.

The classic example of a writer who's very successful but, for me, fails on this score for some reason is Neil Stephenson. Both Snow Crash and The Confusion have wonderful opening scenes, and yet once I put them down I never had the urge to pick them up again. (Cryptonomicon, by contrast, held me to the very last of its many, many pages.)

Why? This is my own personal twitch, but... neither of them had a character who I cared about enough that I wanted to spend more time with them. I don't necessarily have to like the character – the people in pameladean Tam Lin were all the artsy types whom I avoided like the plague while I was in college, but somehow she made them interesting enough that I wanted to see what happened to them. (In that case, I think it was her description of the children's books the main character was leaving behind that did it for me.) So, having given all you writers my wisdom on what I want ("make me turn the pages") I confess I have no idea how to accomplish it.

2. I've read a lot of stuff. I have seen most of the things people are trying to do, done better, already. So, surprise me. papersky (writing, as she says, at the edges of genre) is a master of this. She doesn't always succeed in getting me to turn the pages (some of her more esoteric fantasy doesn't have the hooks shaped to lure me in), but when she does, she has me hooked but good.

3. Be honest? To misquote Hemingway, I think, all you have to do is sit in front of the keyboard and bleed. Again citing papersky that was what made Among Others a Hugo-winner. (Along with it being a page-turning and showing me an enormous amount of stuff I hadn't seen before, of course... but it was its honesty that sold the deal.) 

By contrast, I can think of a couple of other writers (again, very successful but still...) who write fantasies where you walk away wondering if they really believe in their story. Not just that, when they walk away from the keyboard they know it's fiction; but even while writing it, they know it's fiction. Or they make their characters do what is expected, rather than showing that spark of insanity that reality always holds.

Anyway, time for my 8:15 meeting...

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selidor
Feb. 6th, 2013 08:19 am (UTC)
When I look at my bookshelf, all the must-keep books are ones that showed me something I'd never seen done before. The comfort reads are the ones that had that, and had good characters: select Bujold, McKillip, Vinge, etc. So 1) and 2) are a necessity, but 3) maybe not so much. 3) helps a lot for making a book memorable, but not necessarily for making me want to re-read it.

Partly that's why I'm enjoying the current wave of (mostly short-story) young-gun authors so much: MacFarlane, Lee, de Bodard, Rajaniemi & co. are all doing 2) very enthusiastically.

brotherguy
Feb. 6th, 2013 06:29 pm (UTC)
Actually, by "honest" I meant more than just bleeding on the page. I meant that people should act like people (if they are people, or like aliens if they are aliens); that a system invented in chapter 2 should still work the same way in chapter 20; and that the outcome of the story should be believable, even if surprising... indeed, all the better if the surprise makes you think, "Yes, that's right! I wouldn't have thought of that, but now that you've shown it to me, I see that it's exactly right."

If the author isn't honest, I feel cheated and lied to, and angry that he/she has wasted my time.

Which means that to tell some of my favorite examples of honesty in the genre risks spoilers. (I will merely point at one of my more recent favorites in this regard, River of the World books by desperance ). But, to give a classical counterexample, I would put the contrived happy ending of David Copperfield exactly in the "dishonest" camp.

Edited at 2013-02-06 06:30 pm (UTC)
rono_60103
Feb. 6th, 2013 05:31 pm (UTC)
The classic example of a writer who's very successful but, for me, fails on this score for some reason is Neil Stephenson. Both Snow Crash and The Confusion have wonderful opening scenes, and yet once I put them down I never had the urge to pick them up again. (Cryptonomicon, by contrast, held me to the very last of its many, many pages.)

Back in 1995, I was on an extended business trip to Seattle. One of my duties was to babysit a cell site overnight - a task that required next to nothing from me other than my physical presence. So I was doing a lot of reading. One night, I forgot my book and picked up a copy of The Pelican Brief and started reading. By the time my shift ended I was somewhere between 2/3 and 3/4 of the way through. I put the book down, went back to my hotel and have never had any interest in picking it back up - or for that matter much of Grisham's other works (although my mom convinced me to read Skipping Christmas a couple of years later).

Edited at 2013-02-06 05:32 pm (UTC)

marina_bonomi
Feb. 6th, 2013 07:53 pm (UTC)
Agree on all three
And for me number three trumps all, if I come away from a book with the feeling that the writer treats that setting just as a theatrical backdrop, with no consistency, no import, no 'inner truth' I'm tempted to say, then no matter how I like the characters or how intriguing or novel a tale they are spinning, it will feel hollow to me.

This is the reason why I detest Orlando Furioso http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Orlando_Furioso, too many times in the poem I can just see Ariosto wink to the reader with a 'look what they want me to write...' nudge.
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